Ever Skyward 1-12

This panel is very interesting, and by that I mean you have a lot going on here. Even though the killing is done, this panel easily pulls people in due to what’s happening after the killing. Your play of silence here is good (at least to my standards), and the timing is nice. It’s like a movie- the people have killed the monster and they now are watching it decompose right off the bat. The panels are very well done, they’re neat and even, with good amounts of spacing between them. We can follow the flow very well, and the shading and coloring of these characters go well with each other, and the mood you have going here.

Nothing seems wrong with the panels, but your page is missing your signature. You should at least try to put it in somewhere on the comic so that it can be traced back to you. Maybe on the negative space that doesn’t have anything. A page number on it will also be nice, letting people know which page they’re looking at. Your description could use a link to the cover page, previous page, and the next page whenever you get it done. That way people can trace the comic back to the first page real easy instead of having to quickly glance through your gallery. It also helps give it that feel of a digital comic book.

Overall the atmosphere in these pages, and the character’s expressions go well with what’s being said and what’s going on. I really like how you zoomed in on the creature starting to melt/decompose in that third panel. Not to mention the blood also disappearing away that’s left on the character, and the zoom up on f the blade that probably did the killing. Overall very interesting.

Great work and keep up the amazing job.